No idea where to put this(no AAR aka story forum) CONTACT!

"Nice throw! bet you cant do that at g!"

"What a throw across the cargo bay, na don't think I can" he caught the football as it was returned. (stolen from enterprise)

"Bridge to Captain" said a cool but tense voice over the intercom.

"Go ahead" The man said as he put away the football.

"We've got unidentified ships of an unidentified class on screen!" The voice had lost its cool tone and was quickly becoming urgent.

"Hail them!"

"Already tried on all channels, they are not responding but energy levels are increasing according to our sensors?"

"Any way to tell if its engines or weapons?"

"None sir!"

"On my way, head to the boundary of the gravity well and prepare for phase jump! Ensign!"

"Yes sir?" the other man participating in the game replied.

"Go to your post I want those weapons ready! Bridge prepare weapons as well!"

"Roger that sir, shields charged and ready."

"Good hopefully we can get out of this---"

***

"Theres no more?"

"None admiral"

"The recorder show any signs of a struggle?"

"No sir, its like they just didnt exist any more"

"And there was no debris left either I take it?"

"None at all"

"Damn this is the fifth incident this week!"

"What are we going to do?"

"What can we do? This cobbled fleet was only made in response to pirate raiders and this wasn't pirates, too fast and efficient! The trade order doesn't have enough coordination or power!"

"So we are just going to wait?"

"Of course not! Send some escorts with any ship sticking to civilized routes!" The Admiral could only pray that he had not just sent good men to their deaths. Little did he know that a few escorts meant nothing to the Vasari, a race who had made a living on destroying and raiding other cultures.
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oooo interesting, a storie on first vasari contact..
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I like it, written from the perspective of the dead at first.
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I think we have a an off site forum for this.

Claps for the story :)

Oh and its phase jump :LOL:
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cant believe I actually wrote face jump!
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nice! Interested in seeing how this one progresses.

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Idea thief :(
Youll know it soon enough, so dont ask me.
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Im sorry I wrote it first aldarian. Unless you think I can hack your mind and predict its course I was first :P
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They were the newest ships available to the trade order. Of course that didn't mean they were any good. They were called cobalts. Cobbled together from various parts and hulls they were not really a unified class. "C1 this is C3 Im getting some weird fluctuations from sensors"

"Roger that C3, C5 take C4 and investigate. C3 C2 flank the cargo fleet" The two ships complied, accelerating into position. C5 and C4 headed towards the approximate source of the distortion.

"C4 here, C3 was right its unidentified doesn't look like pir--"

"C4 C5 where are you?" Silence and static. "C3 C2 we have to hold them off, cargo fleet head outside of the gravity well and prepare for phase jump."

"C3 here, C2 is heading for jump as well. Why that no good son of a HOLY CRAP HE JUST EXPLODED! They just got the cargo!"

"C1 here, I see it. Doesn't look like pirates at all, it looks...alien. missiles on route full power to shields!" The missiles jumped through the shields and vaporized C1.

"Set this to full broadcast! This is the cobalt escort C2 escorting supplies to the volcanic planet *krsssh* Repeat have been ambushed by unknown *krsshh* Shields useless *krssh*"
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"Thats all there is Admiral!"

"I see, tell me have the scum contacted us yet?"

"Which ones, the pirates about the bounty, or the raiders about assaulting us?"

"Both"

"Pirates haven't and we have no idea where the aliens are coming from."

"Tell me what would the joint trade council do if I refused to up the escorts again?"

"Slash our budget again?"

"I see...and they don't care that I'm just ordering men to their deaths?"

"Men or credits sir, men or credits."
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Im sorry I wrote it first aldarian. Unless you think I can hack your mind and predict its course I was first
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Thats the joke I wrote mine at the beginning of November ;) and Ive thought about it since I read the story from Sins a year ago or so ;p
But .... dont talk to much aldarian ....

Ah and its your Story, mine is different and I like your story, so just go on :CONGRAT:
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Fanfic is cool. It would be neat to have a few people develop different story lines for each race and mesh them together as a cogent story for each. Then map out where they overlap and make sure things are consistent as well as logical and it would be a helluva of story from three perspectives. Then some of our media oriented community members can story board it all out and make some shorts. Who knows it could another Red vs Blue phenomena.
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Yup, but its hard for someone to fit his personal thoughts into some others.
But, we could really need a fanfic forum, so that everyone gets a platform to post his/hers expressions....
Or maybe... we could ask Multianna so that his side could host the fanfiction =)
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I am forgetful aldarian forgot to add the *sarcasm* tag to my comment to you. Do not take anything I say too seriously XD. 1Spartan sign me up! That would be awesome.
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I wont ;) but only if you continue with your story :LOL:
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Yup, but its hard for someone to fit his personal thoughts into some others.
But, we could really need a fanfic forum, so that everyone gets a platform to post his/hers expressions....
Or maybe... we could ask Multianna so that his side could host the fanfiction
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If you want a fanfic forum outside of these forums set up let me know. We have forums already set-up for clans and mod projects at our domain ClansofSin.com.

We have not been promoting the domain yet since the website is not done due to our graphics guy being drafted into the military and no one is readily available to replace him.

If anyone is interested please contact me. :)
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quick question Vasari has stealth ship or not? Never really needed to build them 4 caps were usually enough.
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Nope... but one cap ships has the ability to phasejump from everywhere to everywhere in a system (didnt use that ability yet, i only read about it)
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Nope... but one cap ships has the ability to phasejump from everywhere to everywhere in a system (didnt use that ability yet, i only read about it)
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...no... there is a capship that can set up a phasegate node so any ships in that system can use a phasegate to jump to it, but the ship itself is limited to normal movement...
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hehehe ive got my next idea, lets say ambushing a marauder(thats the one with the phase node right?) is never a good idea :D
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hehehe ive got my next idea, lets say ambushing a marauder(thats the one with the phase node right?) is never a good idea
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Eh, depends on its level -- before level 6, its risky but doable (phase out = nasty!). At level 6, if the enemy has phase gate technology it becomes a monster.
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Eh doesn't really matter first time humans meet these things, they are gods XD
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It was the biggest fleet gathering in the entire history of the trade order. There were literally dozens of cargo ships headed towards terra(will change name if it doesnt sound canonical). They were moving at top speed and were set for a direct course out of the gravity well ... or so it seemed. In reality there were dozens upon dozens of cobalts and several kodiak mobile assault platforms. They used a Footprint Magnification System to simulate a large bulky cargo fleet. The other half were cargo ships, half of them modified to be carriers.

"This is AP-1 no sign of enemy over"

"Roger that AP-1, command carrier Atlantis to fleet: good job folks we might make it out of this one!"

"Sir this is AP-12 request a cobalt wing check out coordinates epsilon gamma rho, some unusual sensor distortions there."

"What the hell? No im not going to mobilize a wing of Cobalts. All ships fire upon coordinates. Cargo ships to full burn!"

"Sir deploying all wings now, looks like its only one!"

"Thank you Ensign! This is Atlantis, this is a good day to make the other guy die for his cause!"

Fighters launched, beam weapons powered up, missiles launched, and all these events were dwarfed by dozens of ships simultaneously exiting phase space.

"Atlantis here anyone get an id on the party crashers?"

"This is AP-1, negative sir but the distortions are similar to the original!"

"Atlantis here we will HOLD POSITION! I do not want a single ship to get past us, ram them if you have to!"

The combined fleet bravely faced their attackers and were cut down one by one as waves of missiles vaporized their targets. Oh yes there were survivors this time: one cargo ship made it back, bringing with it the tale of the massacre.

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Dang, each post gets shorter eh *sigh* The next one WILL be longer!
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The next one WILL be longer!
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just up the font size <3
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just up the font size <3
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hahaha :LOL:
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love the story keep writing, i am gonna make a try at the advent so here goes

The TEC defenses at Tal were woefully weak. As rank after rank of the Advent fleet jumped out of Phase Space and clouds of fighter exited the carriers to provide a screen for the capital ships and frigates, the feeble remnants of the TEC fleet were already expanding clouds of debris. High Commander Salator ordered that a sample of the life on Tal be taken and all major political figures were to be taken on bourd of the Coming Darkness, his flagship. To weeks later after the computer banks of Tal had been analyzed and copies dispatched to their home world Salator ordered the world destroyed. As he watched the antimatter explosions blossom across the landscape like deadly flowers he smiled. The Return had begun.



Tell me what you all think and I will write some more if you all like it.
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hay! get ur own thread!