OK! Both chapters 10, 2 and 10, 3 have been edited and changed! If you still have problems with them, let me know. And before anyone mentions this, antimatter will remain in points. Not changing that, that's how they measure how much they have of it.
[quote who="HiddenMaster" reply="406" id="2347414"]Now, the thing about Hati removing Veronica's psitech, I think theres a problem with that. In the Sins manual, it says that the Advent use neuro chemicals and cybernetic implants to augment their psionic abilities. I would assume that everyone in the Unity, uses these to increase psionic abilities, and the higher ranking people in the Advent are the ones that are simply more
[quote who="Tsurani" reply="166" id="2346664"]{....I knew it!} High One, what are these Ideals that concern you? and what is the name of your language? [/quote] Haiti is too headstrong, he is too arrogant. I fear for the fate of the Unity under his hands. {translation: Haiti is too headstrong, he is too arrogant. I fear for the fate of the Unity under his hands.} <span style="font-famil
Chapter 10, part 3 High One The Advent <span style="fon
[quote who="Orodum" reply="151" id="2340934"][I didn't think that you were. I can be (and generally am) detached from my character, too. But I said "alien" invaders, not Unity invaders] [/quote] [Eon's right about the Advent not knowing the Vasari are there.] [quote who="eoncommander" reply="152" id="2341164"][obviously, they dont know of the alien invaders yet. they only had momentary contact with a scout ship, and they havent done any spyin
[quote who="Orodum" reply="398" id="2340936"] Quoting eoncommander, reply 390 woohoo! a new part! now for some constructive criticism this is just a personal thing, but i really didnt like the hull points and dps and stats taken directly from the game. i understand it makes it much easier, but you're writing about real frigging combat. your characters can talk like it. the first half of the story was a little annoying, because
Chapter 10, part 2 Kol 2.0 The Trader Emergency Coalition <span style="font-family: terminal,monaco
[quote who="Orodum" reply="120" id="2337073"]oh, by the way, do you remember the Transcedia? (here's a hint, look left) [/quote] The Transcendia? No, we have not come across anything by that name. What is it?
[quote who="Orodum" reply="119" id="2337070"]are you the typical american woman? [this is a joke, not a serious question, so don't take offence, ladies] what is thy position among the Unity? [/quote] American? They are one of the fabled civilizations on Earth. Are you a participant in the Search? Please forgive me, I did not know. Time spins and time dilutes, worlds are lost and worlds are found again. Have you found the world? [the traditional request to some
[quote who="JuleTron" reply="116" id="2335976"]Who do you think will win this war? Do you see any end in sight to this terrible conflict? It is often said that wars are the end of an era. What do you think the galaxy will be like after the war is over? (politically, culturally etc. ) [/quote] Win? There is no question to who will win. The High One has forseen it in the World of Visions. We will win the war, and the Reemergence will be victorious. After the w
[quote who="eoncommander" reply="384" id="2336810"]i'm sorry CI, but as great as Sinners is, it is not the longest running SOASE fanfic. not sure who the title belongs to, but the first Saints of a Solar Empire story was posted eight months before yours https://forums.sinsofasolarempire.com/300386 it may very well be the longest, currently, but not the oldest [/quote] but that book has ended. yeah, it was longer, and i loved the book and witchfire'
[quote who="Tsurani" reply="379" id="2333213"]however I think I know why.. hge is of the Old Vasari? well Vasar is implied to be a volcanic planet by the Vasari planet population tech... maybe he chose it because the original home of his race was a volc?[/quote] yes you are close. but this lava was incredibly hotter than noral lava. by just a tad. the planet vasar was made up of a special type of volcanic rock. Fokxnim's planet is made up of mostly the same type of rock.
[quote who="Tsurani" reply="376" id="2328134"]it's been awhile since the last one... at first i thought i hallucinated.... YAY id didnt and yes.. i did check all the zeroes.. it was 18 Quadrillion degrees.. that is really hot lava...[/quote] when we return to the vasari you'll learn why Fokxnim established his base on that volcanic planet, and why the lava is so hot. and the religious differences between Flankx and Fokxnim. yeah tension. it'll still be a week before i get b
[quote who="Tsurani" reply="24" id="2325734"]*stares at screen in disbeleif* AN UPDATE!!!!! love the chapter.. although... the lava was 18 quadrillion degrees? thats hotter than the sun's surface other than that YES loved it! [/quote] yes indeed it was.
[quote who="eoncommander" reply="9" id="2324963"]i would start posting on this thread once i finish reading sinners[/quote] [e digicons]:grin:[/e] thats fine. take your time. [quote who="Orodum" reply="8" id="2324504"]your other thread is off again...[/quote] i can't help it! no one comments!
[quote who="Orodum" reply="1" id="2323054"]["object" of "person" means that person owns the item. kind of like "person"'s "object". it doesn't mean that person is the object. and where is chapter 10?] Specters are beings of unimaginable power, those who once were living, now are dead. they have the strength to break through a ship's hull with their bare hands, and the agility to leap the length of the spinal elevator shaft of a Kortul. They are as shad
I might be wrong, I haven't checked on repair bays in a while, but I think they repair a certain amount of hull/second. So if that was still going on, the repair bay wouldn't "restart" the process until the hull/second count on the building or unit was finished. But I could be wrong.
[quote who="Orodum" reply="15" id="2323043"]I'm afraid that this has left the first page. muwahahaha....[/quote] i refuse to believe it. i never saw it anywhere else. the pride stays. [e digicons]:borg:[/e]
Part 2: Destruction Chapter 10, part 1 Da'Mani'k <p style="text-align: cente
[quote who="Orodum" reply="24" id="2323011"]Da'Mani'k, then, as the great battlestations have not yet been deployed, be you in friendly territory, or hostile? And be yea still aboard the ship of Flanx? for if so, I know where to send my specters...[/quote] Tell me, child, what are specters? I do not like that which I do not know......and I am in friendly territory, obviously, or why would I be talking with you? Why would this be my planet, my DOMINATION, if this was h
[quote who="FinisKalan" reply="18" id="2322217"][Caught that. And I don't blame you one bit. We know that you are portraying the Vasari Mani'k who captured Kol. We also know that it is after the start of the game, and appears to be before Entrenchment. Entrenchment's description says that the war has been going on for "nearly 15 years". I'm assuming that you didn't shift that too much. Based on the various Orbital Cannons having existed and been built for some time, and no knowledg
[quote who="FinisKalan" reply="11" id="2321159"][Just to make sure we are on the same page... the orbital stations would be the starbases. Not knowing of them would mean pre-entrenchment times. And you've already said that is after the main game starts.] I've only heard rumors of the orbital stations. They are supposed to be massive defense platforms of some sort. I know little more than that. You are sure that you've not heard anything about them? &nbs
[quote who="DNA101" reply="10" id="2318995"]yay..... which reminds me ... oh no ive forgot what i was posting...ah thats right try to get an update for sinners by the 16th of august my birthday and my dad got home-made beer set for his birthday.. and it will be done two days before it so double yay [/quote] MY COMPUTER HAS BEEN RESTORED!!!!!!!!!! right now, the problem there is an issue with downloads not being compatible with my computer,but im
[quote who="DNA101" reply="8" id="2320909"]{wormhole???? have i missed something?}[/quote] its a reference from my story Sinners. http://forums.impulsedriven.com/331326
[quote who="FinisKalan" reply="7" id="2320102"]*edit* The forum doesn't seem to like me using partial quotes. I am a chronicler of history. I seek to maintain historical accuracy no matter who the victor is. I talk with many people about many things. One of these people was a Vasari who mentioned the Platinum, its unfortunate downfall, and you being asked to deal with Kol. So there is no need to hunt me down. I simply record facts and update the facts to maintain the truth as I fin