Buddah Moskowitz

Reply to Looking For Something in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Beebeleh - good acrid stuff - get angry and stay there! Shalom

Reply to i feel stupid in Writing JoeUser Forums

being vulnerable - that's the way to get good material

Reply to Lloyd's gone nuts in Art JoeUser Forums

Good eye for detail - compact, nothing unnecessary.

Reply to I got problems in Art JoeUser Forums

Subtle and powerful. Great

Reply to For the hell of it in Art JoeUser Forums

Hey - I never read this one. sheeit. You am one lazy mf - don't jive me - you jes am lazy - be smoking dem mara-jew-ahna ciggarettes - man o man - some peeps got de life - dont give me that "I dont watch the clock" bs - how else would you know when jerry springer is on? nice nice one

Reply to I've Lost Something in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Hi - I'm not sure what the title means. It's good but seems a little disconnected - or maybe I am.

Reply to WHat do you want, Johnny? in Art JoeUser Forums

I ain't no syncophant. I knew you before you were Masuda! Remember, Masuda rhymes with "I'll sue ya!" - where the f is my poetry?

Reply to The Strip club issue in Personal Relationships JoeUser Forums

As a married man who no longer goes to such clubs (and I have no desire to do so either), I don't think it's proper for a married man to go to such clubs. Still, I would also be hesitant about telling a wife (or husband, if the wife was going to such clubs) - perhaps they have an arrangement between the two of them that is none of your business. If they don't have such an arrangement, do you really want to be the bearer of such bad news? It could h

Reply to I look like my mom in Art JoeUser Forums

Mistakes, like scars, are receipts of living life. You am a receipted-up MF.

Reply to I expected you to move on in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Hi Beebes, I know what you mean, I have little / no expectations of people to keep in touch with me. I'm less disappointed that way. Also, I make sure that if I want contact, then I initiate it. Sorry you sound so let down. Been there too, keep writing , Shalom

Reply to Johnny needs a doctor--again in Art JoeUser Forums

Call priceline for that ticket, bro. Aw, shit you need a credit card for that...

Reply to I love you in Poetry JoeUser Forums

This one seems more of a turning point in your writing. More universal - more assured and mature. Good work. Shalom

Reply to all flowers wilt, some bloom in Writing JoeUser Forums

I love the confidence you have in assuming the reader will follow. That's a good perspective, it allows for more depth in your writing. So nice to read your work. Shalom.

Reply to The truth hurts doesn't it in Writing JoeUser Forums

"Hey, lady, it is what it is." - Arrogant asshole landscaper who tried to cuss out my wife for his unprofessional behavior. Fired him.

Reply to Slow Down Your Horses in Writing JoeUser Forums

I understand. In my old days, I wrote a mawkishly poignant song called "Go Slow, Stupid Heart". Your work has a sad beauty that affects me - don't expect that matters, but still wanted you to know. - Shalom, Moskowitz

Reply to don't be mean in Writing JoeUser Forums

this requires multiple readings but your style is crisp enough that I don't mind going over it.

Reply to I Did This All For You in Poetry JoeUser Forums

like the minimalism of your language - keep at it. Good job - shalom

Reply to A day in my life. in Health & Medicine JoeUser Forums

Thank God that at least you've kept your perspective and sarcasm.

Reply to I may appear to be free in Writing JoeUser Forums

All this genuine passion and affection for a person a million miles away. That's the kind of love that inspires writing that's alive. Sorry it has to be that way, but at least you're getting good poetry out of it. Scant consolation, I know.

Reply to my new man in irag and OPSEC* in Writing JoeUser Forums

I like how you bring out the inner dialogue of voices. Also, the comment of how the public invades the private is effective too.

Reply to Smoke and mirrors in Writing JoeUser Forums

sad wise knowing beautiful - I gotta get off my ass and write some more. Thanks bro

Reply to Suffer Not The Heretic To Live in Poetry JoeUser Forums

I like how you bring the poem back to you

Reply to I Sing the Song in Poetry JoeUser Forums

very nice ending - quietly eloquent

Reply to What Happens on TDY Stays on TDY in Writing JoeUser Forums

BTW, it was a quietly powerful poem. Thanks. - Moskowitz

Reply to What Happens on TDY Stays on TDY in Writing JoeUser Forums

Even though I don't know what TDY is, I still get a feeling of longing, of loss - an attempt to deny the undeniable connection. Some lovers get in your soul like chemicals in your bloodstream, and they never really leave you.