New wallpaper, please critique, any suggestions welcomed :D !

Ok here is a new link :
www.telu1.com/Images/wall5_1280_2.jpg

and uncompresed version is:

www.telu1.com/Images/wall5_1280_3.jpg

Ok, want to try again.

http://www.telu1.com/Images/wall5_1280_2.jpg
http://www.telu1.com/Images/wall5_1280_3.jpg

Soz, cant seem to find a edit post button , and im in a hurry.

pretty darn good

Looks OK. I'd loose the text though...

Looks nice...makes my LCD monitor flash like crazy, though...(undoubtedly my drivers). Good work!

Hum, not my style.

Ok updated it a bit , thanks for the comments though.
Peff, it might be the image also, it has a lot of detail (zoom in with a paint prog).
Also, what LCD u got?

Dell laptop @ 1600x1200...just getting the Hz refresh flash...nothing major.

very detailed. Not my style though.
The only thing I don't like about it some of the scratched (corrosion) of the metal.
Some of it doesn't look very real.

Not my style either but it looks real good. Very well detailed on the 'rust' and 'cracks'

not my style... if you created it yourself 100% and didn't create it tutorial by tutorial you should write some tutorials about those techniques yourself

It's the sort of thing that has been popular with LiteSTEP themers and others....The mechanical 'grunge' look....and not too bad an example of it...

liteSTEP = BAAAD
Winamp = GOOD


for seriouse, could be me but the damn thing crashed my hard disk 2 times (just because i didn't take the advice to 'reboot before using the program')

 

Just an example of what I mean....but one of the earliest would have been Thug Life by Praxxis....although that was more LCD display as well...

well since it didnt get accepted (not complaining) here's a link to my new one i did if anyone wants a look, a bit holiday themed, critique would be wonderful.

http://www.banzaiinstitute.net/sigftp/Zephyrssig/letitsnowfull1600.jpg
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telu1....you might want to lose the text along the bottom, as shown in the uploaded one......does nothing for the end effect...

text removed . Thanks for the replys

Ok, uploaded the new version, hope this time it makes the cut , thanks for the comments, any more suggestions ?

Please don't use the message board to display wallpapers, that is what the screenshot section is for! If you want comments or advice, that is the place to do it. If everyone did this, we would have a second wallpaper library in here! 

not a problemo wont happen again

not a problemo wont happen again

soz, will a admin move this, if it is possible?

sorry again.

telu1 no dramas....but it's more appropriate to leave it than to remove it, since people have responded, etc....

problemo is my word!!!

/me holds a flaming stick menacingly

Pronunciation: 'prä-bl&mo, -b&mo, -"blemo
Function: noun
Etymology: Upper American (Canadian) probleme, from Middle French Canadian ('superherocanadian'), literally, obstacle, from proballein to throw forward, from pro- forward + ballein to throw -- more at PRO-, DEVIL
Date: 21st century
1 a : a question raised for inquiry, consideration, or solution b : a proposition in mathematics or physics stating something to be done
2 a : an intricate unsettled question b : a source of perplexity, distress, or vexation c : difficulty in understanding or accepting


dang...he's right!! Never wouldda thoughtit....