My Unimaginative Haiku

Inspired by Shovelheat's Imaginative One

from JoeUser Forums
First line is five words
Then this line is seven words
And this one is five.
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
I especially like the fact that line two is 6 words.. I like it!
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Jythier,
I especially like the fact that line two is 6 words.. I like it!

Well I did warn you I was unimaginative. Thanks for liking it anyway.


Shovel,
Ha! I've got you beat on unimaginative, UDigit!

I'll buy you a beer if you call it a tie.    
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
Even on a sweet haiku you manage to show your smart alec-ness.
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Erm, hate to be picky but a haiku is 7-5-7 syllables, not words. Still, you did well with this one. And I thought is was high on the imagination scale too.
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
Rose,
Even on a sweet haiku you manage to show your smart alec-ness.

Is that a nice way of saying I'm a smartass?


Mark,
Erm, hate to be picky but a haiku is 7-5-7 syllables, not words. Still, you did well with this one. And I thought is was high on the imagination scale too.

Thanks!

Come on, mate you know you love being picky.

I really hate being picky but a haiki is 5-7-5 syllables. Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
Chris,

Oops, that'll teach me for trying to be a smart-arse, right? I actually did mean 5-7-5 but I guess even the best of us can get it wrong
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
Mark,
Oops, that'll teach me for trying to be a smart-arse, right? I actually did mean 5-7-5 but I guess even the best of us can get it wrong

  I have had so many similar moments. I guess all you can do is laugh about it.