Training gone awry

This is based off the SSB Universe, not GC2, just a quick story i made.
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Captains Log, entry 2034.
Subject: Training Disaster.

Kikio, [The person who wrote the Chronicles of Undai] this session went horibly wrong.
Aiki trusted me to train several new recruits to the Oroch Star Navy. He pointed out the orbit of a small Core World, should've been easy enough. Complications ensued long before we even gave the order to prepare and suit up. It was god-awful.
Unat, the Ace assigned to be the Wing Leader, pointed out the atmosphere and the gravity it produced. A foolish pilot would simply get cuaght and dragged in. I looked and agreed. We then set a point 2 Parsecs (1 Parsec=2/3 Astronomical Unit) away from the planet. This, unfourtenatly, was the point were things were we truly f***ed up.
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The first thing that went wrong was that three pilots, 2 males and a female, had gotten in to a fight and both males were severely wounded. Young love i guess, the two males could not have been older than 24 (Age is determined in scale patterns). One pilot, who had simply not been up-to-task was to stay onboard and we replaced him with the 3rd pilot.
Then things really tumbled....
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Captain Jinta: Ok everyone, standard flight procedures, Ardun formation, now!

Wing Leader Unat: Wow, you got it right the first time, i'm impressed!
Murmers of self-apreciation rung through the novices...
"Great" i thought,"Compliments cause crashes" that's what Admiral Hugra told me...you wait 'till after the flights...
But, i guess it wouldn't have mattered, heres were it all just crapped out...
Recons officer: Sir, we're detecting several small ships...possbily Encalle.
Jinta: What!?
R.O: Rapiers sir. They're heading right for us!
Jinta: Unat! Did you-
Unat: All fighters, this is not a drill, i repeat, this is NOT a drill, several Encalle fighters are headed this way, stay calm and follow my lead!
The Dog fight began...
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Unat: Everyone! Set lasers to P4! Follow me!
Unat opened up with his usual excelence...


Unat: Ardon 4,5,6, you've got Encalle above and behind you!
Ardon 4: Wha...AAAHH!
Ardon 5: Keep togethor moron! Follow me!
Ardon 6 & 4: Yes sir!

Jinta: Artilleries, aim all cannons and fire.
A.O: Sir, thi-
Jinta: DON'T ARGUE WITH ME!
A.O: YESSIR!


Ardon 7: Uh...Un..Unat..Unat...AAAAAHHH!
Unat: Hold on! Arcane 1,2, and 3, cover me!

Arcane 2: We can't manuver like that! Wait! Unat, Wait!
Jinta: Unat!
Unata: rrgh...AAGH!

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It..was horrible. My best friend died right before my eyes. What was worst was what he had planned for afterwards...more later, the fight simply continued. The Trainees dropped like flies...






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Jinta: All remaining fighters report in.
Ardon 5: Ardon 4,5,6 reporting in.
Arcane 2: Arcane 1,2,3 shaken but fine, reporting in.
Jinta: Anyone else?
Officer: No sir...
Jinta: GOD
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Reply #1 Top
Bumpity
Reply #3 Top
To get this, you have to know the implications.
In SSB, the Sakturi leader M'razok brutally murders the former Orochi leader Feru, an extremely massive (7 meters tall) Orochi (average orochi=3-5 meters tall) and destroys the original Orochi homeworld. Any soldier to have survived that is well respected.
Jinta was also a veteran before hand, he is over 245 years old.
Orochi have 2 skin cells on the surface, one for identification (this also decides what hair-style they have) and one for age. As Orochi age, about 1 Earth Year, a "ring" is visible in these cells.
Orochi eyes have the capability to magnify up to 10000x normal vision with simply their natural lense.
Yet, their is no difference in natural physical wellness or ability between an Orochi that is 21 years old or 20000 years old. Only thing that could cause difference is training and such.
Unat and Jinta were childhood friends.
Reply #4 Top
You should put a warning in the thread title about there being a lot of images to load.