A Christmas for She and He

This poem has been on hiatis from JU as it was written as a gift. However, since it has since been given to it's proper recipient I thought it would be okay to share it with the rest of you, especially because I really like how it turned out. I was looking in my journal for it to work on and I noticed that I wrote it first back in September. Pretty funny when someone tells you what they want for Christmas in September isn't it? I should also mention that I'm pretty sure this isn't the exact same version that was given, but it's pretty similar, I played with the ending a bit.

-suspeckted




A Christmas for She and He


All she’s asked him for,
This Christmas,
Is this poem.

His poem for her.

One might think,
This mounts such crushing pressure,
As to relinquish him of any inspiration whatsoever.

However,
The flattery,
Whether unintended or precisely as according to plan,
Fills yet another void he had forgotten to seal.

Now she ventures across,
His cavernous insecurities,
With harbored grace and class,
Without even needing to watch her feet.

For she had given him,
A path stomped out,
In the deep snow,
Allowing him,
To stay dry in her tracks.

He has long legs,
So he takes,
Small steps,
With a smile,
That signifies his hope,
Of repaying the favor.

Making amends,
Never obligated or even suggested,
But in order to offer the path he treads,
He will take smaller steps,
For shorter legs,
The very same,
That helped her carry him,
Through the deep snow.

Warm and dry,
He is so thankful to have,
His and her,
You and I,
A Christmas for she and he.
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to the recipient of your poetry,

may you appreciate the incredible man that has fallen in love with you.
may he enrich your life as he did my own.
may his compassion and energy challenge you to see life from a new perspective.
may his reliability and support reinforce the importance of human relationships.
may his non-judgemental accepting nature inspire you.
may you listen through the disclaimers and insecurities to enjoy the honesty that will come out.
may you have the ability to help him realize that he is amazing.

may you share him for occassional cribbage games and coffee.
Reply #2 Top
Now she ventures across,
His cavernous insecurities,


nice... altogether.
Reply #3 Top
Very very nice Suspeckted. I must say that this is one of your best blogs. Hey have you figured out who Nobody important is yet?That Old Rat knows and he won't spill the beans. I'll have to send some bad cheese his way!

LQ
Reply #4 Top
Suspeckted--
It is, in fact, the very same poem I recieved for Christmas. I cannot thank you enough for it--and for this posting, so that others may observe the way you make your words dance into beauty. May I just say how truely flattered I am to be so lucky.

Anonymous User--
I only hope that I can/may/do and already have done any number of the things listed above. I realize more everyday how incredible and amazing he is, and I guess I've known it for quite some time--its just like turning up the brilliantness on you tv screen....you can see the picture in the darker hues, but when you turn up the colors, it is that much more beautiful.

I may share him for the occassional cribbage and coffee (ha, like thats my decision!) if you would give me the pleasure of sharing with me who you are. You evidently know me and know the poet...and I only hope you do know me well enough to know how much this poet means to me.

Cheers and Happy Few Days Before The New Year,
WLC
Reply #5 Top

"""""so that others may observe the way you make your words dance into beauty."""""


yes, thank you sooooooooooooooooo very much.


To Anonymous user said, ditto.


Trinitie

Reply #6 Top
Your words are beautiful. You can feel them coming from your heart. You and Annie are very special, no pun intended~
Reply #7 Top
Thanks to so many of you for reading this,
and of course I owe some more thanks to those who shared such passionate comments.
Annskie, anything I want to say to you concerning this will be reserved for you only, but know that I really do like this piece and I know that has a lot to do with what it makes me feel external to meter and form.

-Suspeckted
Reply #8 Top
Ohhhh....little steps, I like that part...I can see you two now....really little for you Suspeckted...
Reply #10 Top
Thanks Arbs, I was wondering who commented on this so long after. I haven't written much poetry worth posting lately. Probably cause I've gotten wrapped up in pointless political arguments with other bloggers.