"Deaf Trees and Bladders"

By the Exquisite Corpse

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Deaf Trees and Bladders

And then the pig squealed in delight from Barbie's sensual tenderings.
She lounged back on the beach, looking not so much like a goddess as a
beached whale.
Sagely and with benificent intent, the spiced bread turned to mold.

"Thou must breathe fire into the Earth" said the Sky to the Man in the Moon
And the syrup ran from his breasts like, well, syrup.
"Whoof!" he chuffed as the blanched cabbage hit his scrotum.

As the cucumber slowly rotated while being pickled by her love juices
Then the WereCow showed its ferocious teeth - and put them back in its mouth.

The Pegasus has drowned
But how could this be?
it kept opening and opening and finally it just went "FOOM"

kitten livers ask nothing in return
But I don't want your hands on me
humor
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
more great stuff, citahellion !.

i need to spend some time going through what i missed. your mind astounds me.

"like, well, syrup" ! i love it !. hilarious.

vanessa/mig XX
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Check out the third one too: here

I must confess, though, that I didn't write these particular poems in their entirety. The subtitle of each should be "By the Exquisite Corpse." I used to run a dial-up BBS, and what I did for this was, I created a mailbox for people on the system to mail in a line. (I would also send lines in myself, of course, so I probably have two or three lines in any given poem... couldn't tell you which ones, though.) Every once in a while I would open the mail, collect the lines into stanzas, and make up a title. These poems are the result of that process.

I'm thinking if enough people are interested we could do the same here on JU...?

The Political Machine 2024
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
I'm thinking if enough people are interested we could do the same here on JU...?


Count me in!
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
Count me in!


me too, citahellion, please. i'd love to take part, although i'm not sure how good at it i will be !

vanessa/mig XX
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
I'll start a new article about it later today. Typing w/ 1 hand right now, got emergency daycare duty today. Krystal says "babamaaahhh" to everyone.
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
cita,

meanwhile, I have composed a poem out of titles I have found on JU topics. The article is entitles "Burning Bunnies, Boar's Testicles, and snail sex", and yes, the title of this poem made it into the poem. I encourage you to check it out and let me know what kind of job I did.
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
That's a pretty good poem, Gideon!

Anyway, go here for full info about the new Exquisite Corpse process.
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
Krystal says "babamaaahhh" to everyone.


citahellion, tell krystal i said "bwwrsyuuuuukkooo". she will know what i mean. it's a girl thing

vanessa/mig XX
Reply #10 from JoeUser Forums Top

ps: citahellion, it's 3am now, but i'll go to the exquisite corpse post tomorrow. promise !

vanessa/mig XX