To The Sky

I start to write
Then inspiration
Takes flight
Like startled birds
Maybe ducks
Or pheasants
If I could
I’d have a brace
To save face
Fashion a verse
About something
Pleasant

But the birds
That are words
Have escaped
The only way
To capture them
Would be to fly
Ridiculous
I know
But if I will it
I could let go
Of this Earth
Take to the sky

To the sky
Of untold paragraphs
Of boundless images
Of defining allusions
And genius analogies

But I’m left staring
At the page
No bird
Or word landing
For me to capture
And cage
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Reply #1 Top

Wow, talk about a good way to write about writer's block 

~Zoo

Reply #2 Top
Wow, talk about a good way to write about writer's block
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I agree! Just be careful and don't do any writing around Dick Cheney. But seriously...


No bird
Or word landing
For me to capture
And cage
End of quote


I think you done just fine, Maso.
Reply #3 Top
I think you done just fine, Maso.
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Oh aye, that he has. Can say the same for you as well, Roy. :)

~Zoo
Reply #4 Top
Zoo,

Thanks mate. I've always thought the best way to get through a block was to chop it in half. Seems like I might have done this now too.

Roy,

I think you done just fine


Thanks to you too, mate. I like this one for its goofiness.
Reply #5 Top
didn't seem goofy at all!
Reply #6 Top
didn't seem goofy at all


Thanks Nic
Reply #7 Top
Me likey! Especially the last paragraph!
Reply #8 Top
Me likey!


Thanks, Serenity. I actually like this one more and more each time I read it (I hope I doesn't sound conceited... )
Reply #9 Top
What a wonderful flight, mate.

You almost make me wanna get off my perch.
Reply #10 Top
You almost make me wanna get off my perch


Oh, please do, mate. I'd love to see some more of your writing. Get to it!