Haiku JU Challenge, reply 2.

or; 2 of (hopefully) many.

from JoeUser Forums
This haiku is written in shorter traditional form, eschewing the 5-7-5 scheme in favor of a 3-5-3 scheme.





Carnations:
Shifting pinks, blues, greens,
noise erupts.


(I don't expect anyone to get the reference in this except for BlueDev. And he doesn't usually do the poetry thing, so there.)
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Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Pretty nice...I hardly ever see the shorter versions.
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Green Carnations are my favoritest flower ever.
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top

And he doesn't usually do the poetry thing

You know, to be honest, I shouldn't say that too much.  I have written a few poems I have here.  The one of which I am most proud is "Ode to the Shephard's Snort".  Really quite a bit or writing, if you ask me.

Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
'Noise Erupts'? Interesting...