Vague Illusions

or; snapshot #4

It's been a long time since I've posted a "snapshot of the moment", as I've been wont to do (here, here, and here).



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The pine needles prick my spine as I lean back, looking up into the sky, watching the drifts of snowy clouds saunter through the blue readiness. Anticipation builds up inside me, slowly coming to a climax, abating, calming, flowing assuredly to the other extreme.

I feel trapped in a pendulum of emotion.

The notes flow through my ears, connecting, coalescing into a melody most sublime. Your voice quivers – I can sense your apprehension as you sing me your siren song, wavering slightly, yet gaining strength with each passing second. The husky contralto crescendos, decrescendos, crescendos once again. In the last moment, you sing the final, culminating note – and I’m left in the garden of silence once again.

Our eyes meet. “Well, that’s my song,” is all you say. It’s all you have to say.

I wrap my arms around you, pulling you closer to me, running my hands across your seamless back. I smile as I move nearer, ever nearer.

“It was perfect.”


(Inspired by Cult of Luna’s “Vague Illusions”, from their disc Salvation.)





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Reply #1 Top
I'm not sure what to say to this, except that it is lovely.

And I wish I could sing like that.
Reply #2 Top
soothing and serene and makes me want some of that singin' too  
Reply #3 Top
Thanks to both of you. Glad you liked it.
Reply #4 Top
watching the drifts of snowy clouds saunter through the blue readiness


What a nice line, mate. Adds to delicateness of this piece beautifully.
Reply #5 Top
Adds to delicateness of this piece beautifully.


Thanks. I kinda like the way this turned out . . .
Reply #6 Top
The notes flow through my ears, connecting, coalescing into a melody most sublime. Your voice quivers – I can sense your apprehension as you sing me your siren song, wavering slightly, yet gaining strength with each passing second. The husky contralto crescendos, decrescendos, crescendos once again. In the last moment, you sing the final, culminating note – and I’m left in the garden of silence once again.


Pure Coolness.   
Reply #7 Top
Thanks, Shovel. Looking back and reading this, I can't believe this was inspired by a sludge metal song.
Reply #8 Top
Looking back and reading this, I can't believe this was inspired by a sludge metal song.

With me I'm always surprised where I find inspiration.

Very cool 'snapshot', Braeden. Hope you continue to find a muse.