it begins

come get me

i'm done


got the words



read between the lines




the new world is there


a pipdream or pain and peace
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Maybe someone should tell him to put a band-aid on that toe?
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Maybe someone should tell him to put a band-aid on that toe?


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Pretty good weed eh GT?
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I hope that you will feel better soon.
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denial anger bargaining sadness acceptance
maybe
but laughing at him beat off beats all
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you didn't get it though thousands and thousands of others did. That is my fault. Sorry.
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I guess this kind of stupido reaction is to be expected when I put up such rough first drafts that the barely literate can find something wrong.... you people really need to wonder about yourself if you think I can't write.
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Or maybe you should put down that pipe.
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you people really need to wonder about yourself if you think I can't write


Well, aren't you a pleasant little ass who can't take criticism. Let's see that post of yours again:

i'm done


got the words



read between the lines




the new world is there


a pipdream or pain and peace


What exactly the f*ck am I missing out of this thing? This is unintelligible gibberish.
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THE CHURCH OF THE BLEEDING TOE


is this a splinter group?.....
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is this a splinter group?.....


Thank you, I needed that laugh!!!
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Poets probably 'need' to be able to spell.

"OMFG what is the deep meaning behind the sublime use of 'pipdream' rather than 'pipedream'?  It's the angst of repressed social flatulence eloquently verbalized with a mere 'e' omission.  Brilliant."

Or not....

Drug abuse was invented by the Beat generation....

"where's Dave?"...."Dave's not here, man..."

Toke....toke....

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i've read between the lines! and guess what i found? just blank spaces...
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The sun kisses the morning sky. The birds kiss the butterflies. The dew kisses the morning grass and you..class...class..WAKE UP
Sister Mary Elephant