A Couple of Grammar and Spelling Items

I was exploring the new mechanism for upgrading planets from orbit and I saw a couple of things you may want to fix.

  1. In the description for the Space Elevator I believe the word "send" should be "sending". (first screen snapshot below)
  2. In the description for the Orbital Research Lab I believe the word "varibles" should be "variables". (second screen snapshot)

Another minor quibble is that you show both the costs and the benefit under the heading of "Production Costs".  A possible fix would be to add the word "Gained" after the benefit (i.e. "Minerals Gained", "Technology Gained", etc.).

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Thanks!

Reply #2 Top

Always appreciate these types of catches Paul!

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Here's another one in the Intolerance trait: "negitively" should be "negatively".

Have you considered running all of your text through a spell check and/or grammar tool? If nothing else, you could paste your text into a Word document and it will find spelling errors and make grammar suggestions.  Clearly, what you are doing now is not working very well.

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Within the Authority ideology tree the "Intimadating" trait should be spelled "Intimidating" and within the description "Intimadation" should be spelled "Intimidation".