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JU Haiku Challenge

A few haikus

June 10, 2007 9:24 AM from

Boredom:

I've done many things
I stare blankly into space
What should I do now?

Political:

What have you done, sir?
The mission was completed.
Why can't they come home?

Ego:

A thousand women
Line up at my door each night
They can't all be wrong.

poetry

2,555 views 7 replies

Reply #1 June 10, 2007 11:14 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I liked the ego one best

Reply #2 June 10, 2007 12:05 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

me too.

Reply #3 June 10, 2007 1:23 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Thanks, glad to hear the word 'liked' instead of 'least hated'.

Reply #4 June 10, 2007 3:05 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

The last one is my fave, too.

Reply #5 June 10, 2007 6:21 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

The last one is my fave, too.

And my fave as well. Sounds like something I would've wrote.

Reply #6 June 11, 2007 9:58 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I like the punchline of the third but prefer the sentiment of the second.

Reply #7 June 11, 2007 11:46 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Much better at punchlines than sentiment, though.

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