RAP BY PlayJeff45

Be careful what you wish for, you just may get it.   

Nice one, but try to seperate the lines so as to make it easier to read.

It took me 3 times reading this to realize it said "a pie" and not "her pie"....

Still funny though!

Mmmmmm Pie

i dont know how to separate the lines i was really expecting some bad coments so I could whine a little and ask to be friends no offence if you see this general just a little ribbing buddy  

Just hit enter twice after each line to create a break. Maybe you and the General can collaborate on a good Dark Avatar rap   
Edit: As the original poster, you can edit your original post even after others have replied.

Don't ya love it, they make stupid inane tardy comments and then, when they get stomped on, instead of blasting back they run home to mamma!!!!

That was the first thing i noticed about Wheel. My first interaction with him was a fairly long and drawn out flame war, but not once did any of us then start looking to kiss and make up. It seems to be a growing trend around here.

I think i will go and post,
some inane crap that's sure to roast.

Not sure if i can take the heat,
if it gets' too hot i'll just act all sweet.

Wait!! This is'nt working.
Aww, now i am really distressed,
for others are lurking, and boy are they pissed!

Please don't hurt me i'm ever so meek,
NO! Put up or shut up you fraking geek!!!!

Now that my friend is what
raps all about

WHAT RYHMES WITH ABOUT?  

I do think I detect some actual talent. I also agree with the sentiment, but only up to a certain point. Beyond that point it's merely abuse, but everyone has their own subjective opinion of where that line lies.

Your right Mumble i just re-read it and it did come off a bit harsher than i intended. But i'll stand by it. It wasn't directed at anyone in particular and is just a rant about the current forum etiquette as it stands right now. And since a rap is the flavour of the month i thought i'd just go with the flow, as for the talent....well if there is any it will remain confined to my shower, that's the only place i sound good!!!



mmmmmmm,

Now that my friend is what raps all about,
nice to hear you have your shout.

I'm a pretty little lout,
just in bed with a case of the gout.
Listen up to what i spout, or go and fish for that elusive trout.
No, no please don't pout, this aint what that's about!

This rap is for any little ol' chap,
trap, lap, sap, map WHAT! geez aint this all crap!

Playjeff is the dopest of dope,
with Mumble and Deth watching us choke,
Fear not were sure to find someone to poke,
but it's all in jest, so no need for the old hanging rope.

Sorry to drop down on your rhyme,
you needed help, and i had the time.

Let's end this shite and get back to the game,
My name is DJ whitey white and i'm going insane!

Actually it's fine and I didn't think it was overly harsh. It basically stated that if you can't stand the heat, get out of the kitchen. The concept that someone that starts something controversial, takes a few shots at some folks and then backs off when his shots are returned in spades deserves what he get *is* valid. My only point is that even when legitimately provoked, people should maintain a sense of balance and moderation. Also the source should be considered and allowances should be made for, let's just say, people of lessor experience.

BTW, excellent stuff.   

YEP, your rhymes are awesome.
Playjeff's would be if they were spaced out.

Agreed, but it's so hard when they are the ones most inline for the outrageous response, but probably do deserve some consideration.

Yea loved the high maintenance honey part...

Really funny.