Rough Night

what are tears
to me I do not cry
say cry me a river cry
me an ocean but the
ocean is here and it pounds
into my head relentless
the weakest point a hairline
fracture a single salty drop to
betray the hurricane.
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Hey, very good. Terse and packed with intensity.

Good job! Thanks!