Niebla

or; song in Aeolian mode, inverted (in Spanish)

from JoeUser Forums
Si hubiera decidido escaparme de tu amor
Yo pudiera recibido un montón menos dolor

Puedo ver las golondrinas, el rocío y el sol

Si acaso tú me hablas, cerraré mi corazón
Porque me cansan tus miradas . . . llego harto de este son

Puedo ver las golondrinas, el rocío y el sol

Siento ciego en la niebla de esta tonta confusión
El claro cielo me fascina - ya he perdido la razón
¡Qué perdición!

Puedo ver las golondrinas, el rocío y el sol



© 2006 Braeden Jones
poetry
2,071 views 9 replies
Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Hmm...I like it.

~Zoo
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
something about sun, love and gondolas?


The line is actually "I can see the sparrows, the dew, and the sun" . . . close though!

Thanks both for at least taking a look. I don't expect a lot of response to this baby, because most of the people here won't understand . . .
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
I got a bit of it...I'm not exactly a Spanish expert...but I know some...4 years of high school Spanish, I'd better remember something.

~Zoo
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
Don't speak the language either. I'm going to have to take lessons soon enough though. Glad there's an expert 'on my doorstep'!
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
4 years of high school Spanish, I'd better remember something.


You'd better remember a bit, man . . .

Glad there's an expert 'on my doorstep'!


You know it, Donna! Think of me like a free tutor!
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
ok, so I copied your text into a translator, and it completely fouled up the poetry, but still I could sense this was a poem of longing, and even through the lousy translation, there was something good in there!

Moskowitz,
The embarrassed Mexican Jew who can't speak espanol worth mierda
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
so I copied your text into a translator, and it completely fouled up the poetry, but still I could sense this was a poem of longing, and even through the lousy translation, there was something good in there!


I'm gonna translate it . . . that way you can get a decent translation . . . thanks at any rate, B!
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
mierda


Well, at least you have the important words down, eh? LOL

~Zoo