The Crush

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There he is

that tall drink of water

his voice

smooth

each word awakens in me

like molten fire


those eyes

oh how I could swim in them

to find the place

that is his heart

his center


my brain hurts

trying to wrap our bodies together

oh the things he could do to me


I remember

those hands, long, tapered fingers

large hands that makes me wonder if….

yes if…..


I scan his body

that firm, taut mass of muscles

as he moves

ever

so…

“oh…...”

my heart goes pitter patter

p-i-t-t-e-r p-a-t-t-e-r


his eyes seeks mine

and I smile at him

he’s mine
poetry
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
I love the images, Donna. Another great poem. You're making me want to go and play my guitar and see if I can't get another song or two written . . .
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Reply By: San ChoninoPosted: Sunday, September 03, 2006I love the images, Donna. Another great poem. You're making me want to go and play my guitar and see if I can't get another song or two written . .


Aw, that's sweet of you to say Braenden! Great, go on, do it!
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top

Ohooohhh I like this serenity!  Thank you for sharing it!    It reminds me of my first husband....

Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
Ohooohhh I like this serenity! Thank you for sharing it! It reminds me of my first husband....


You're welcome Trudy! I actually wrote this thinking of my first very serious crush, then it rolled into my last and most recent one, my hubby!!
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
Those first two lines make me put this whole poem in a southern drawl.

It's very good, even though it goes on about a guy, which frankly doesn't interest me that much.

~Zoo
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Those first two lines make me put this whole poem in a southern drawl. It's very good, even though it goes on about a guy, which frankly doesn't interest me that much.


Hahaha, thx Shaun!!
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
You set my heart racing, i could feel what you felt!
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
I always find it interesting to hear what women find attractive about men. very well written. thanks for being honest about hand size. I think most women say it doesn't matter, but I tend to distrust this.
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
You set my heart racing, i could feel what you felt!


Wow, that's great Jen! It had me tingling just remembering!



I always find it interesting to hear what women find attractive about men. very well written. thanks for being honest about hand size. I think most women say it doesn't matter, but I tend to distrust this.


Well, some say not, but it's true for most! ! Glad you liked it Mr. Moskowitz!