Requiem

or; Poem in E-sharp minor, if you must . . .

I look across the verdant field
The sky, completely overcast
It seems to mirror perfectly
The way I used to feel

Tumultuous, twisted painfully
The thoughts of just what could have been
The memory of your lovely face
Is all I've left that's real

The lightning comes, it strikes the ground
And throws its sparks across the field
The grass, once green, now coppers from
The licking, burning flames

I stand there in a ring of fire
And let the flames course up my calves
I'm past the point of feeling; I'm
Consumed within my thoughts

The skin begins to crack and peel
I feel the pain, at last, begin
To rouse me from my lifeless world
And take me out again . . .

I'm finally breaking out of the cycle I've been in
Pity that the only thing to break me out is my pain
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Reply #1 Top
Howdy San Chonino, I like visuals...good work.
Reply #2 Top
Thanks, man. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reply #3 Top
This reminded me of Trent Reznor's "Hurt". A nice piece of writing. Keep it up.
Reply #4 Top
This reminded me of Trent Reznor's "Hurt". A nice piece of writing. Keep it up.


Wow, high praise. That is one of my favorite songs that he's done. Thanks, Buddah.
Reply #7 Top
Yep, real nice...
Reply #8 Top
Jennifer, Shovel, Maso, thanks a bunch to all of you!