The front page still says that preordering will let you into the beta.  Does that need updated?

Within the lore section:

On the "Of the cataclysm" page, the end of the sentence in the third paragraph "in which most of the magic in the world is now stored in." doesn't need the final "in."  You could either delete the final "in" or change it more radically to read ", thus creating the shards that preserve the last of the world's magic."

Within the "Of the Fallen" section, second paragraph, "all together evil" should be "altogether evil" or "unredeemably evil".

Please take these suggestions as my attempt to be helpful.  I'm a huge fan of Stardock's work.  I'm not a very helpful beta tester because I don't have the time to tinker with the game enough to develop detailed reports of bugs, but I can write. 

I'm hopeful that we'll see more of the game lore coming to the elementalgame site soon to create more interest in the game.  The heroes in E:WoM bring the opportunity for much more involved storytelling than the relatively impersonal starships of GalCiv.